Dianne

Here are the updates to the galleys for the LgoP paper.


line 3     replace "such as" by "i.e." in italics.
line 137   change "new" into "latest" 
line 148   replace "not the same" by "not driven by the same"
line 177   add comma after "ones"
line 181   replace "adapting these parameters to different machines." by 
           "adapting to different machines in terms of these parameters." 
line 220   replace "small size" with "small fixed size"
line 222   replace "such as" by "such"
line 222   replace "[L/g]" with "CEIL L/g CEIL"
           (CEIL denotes the ceiling function, indicated by vertical bars
           with corners at the top, but not the bottom.
line 273   add comma after "impact"
line 310   replace "Moreover the" with "Moreover, the"
line 312   same ceiling function as in line 222
line 356   replace "encourage" by "encourages".
line 361   delete comma after "problems"
line 381   replace "the remaping data" by
           "remapping the data". Note corrected spelling.
line 391   editors comment: no, do not spell out LU
line 401   after "sizes" add "(N)"
line 405 replace "of keys" with "of keys per processor (N/P)"
line 406   replace "microkernels" by "microseconds".
line 410   replace "We" with Ingoring the capacity constraint, we"
line 410   insert "that" after "predict".
line 414   eliminate "In fact,"
line 427   replace "by" with ","
line 427 Insert ceiling function (like line 222)
line 436 Add a reference to LogGP paper 
Here is the citation (which then should go in the reference section):
  Alexandrov, A., Ionescu, M., Schauser, K. E., and Scheiman, C.,
  LogGP: Incorporating Long Messages into the LogP model,
  7th Annual Symposium on Parallel Algorithms and Architectures, July 1995

line 439   replace "there is the send overhead, such as" with
                   "the send overhead is"
line 458 Center the "M" in the "M/W" formula
line 449 replace "distance of the route" with "distance of the route (number of
hops)"
line 450 replace "node," with "routing node"
line 451   replace "there is the receive overhead, i.e., with
                   "the receive overhead is"
line 462   replace "includes" with "include"
line 471 Same as 458 (also the horizonal line is at the wrong place)
line 521 replace "design, and discrepancies" with "design. Discrepancies"
line 524 replace "model; and cor-recting" with "model. Correcting"
line 539 replace "4D" with "four dimensional"

567-634 The references are not very consistent.  Some use page numbers,
others not.  Easy solution: omit them all.  

It would be very good to replace Reference 4 with 

Dusseau, A. C., Culler, D. E., Schauser, K. E., and Martin, R. P.
Fast Parallel Sorting under LogP: Experience with the CM-5.
IEEE Transactions on Parallel and Distributed Systems,
vol 7, no. 8, aug. 1996, pp. 791-805


668 replace "we have developed" with "LogP is"
    This quote is pretty weak.

672-675  This is a good quote and should be used!

About the Authors:

DAVID E. CULLER is an Associate Professor of Computer Science and Engineering
at the University of California, Berkeley. e-mail: culler@cs.berkeley.edu

RICHARD M. KARP is Professor of Computer Science and Engineering and
Adjunct Professor of Molecular Biotechnology at the University of Washington, 
Seattle, WA 98195. e-mail: karp@cs.washington.edu

DAVID A. PATTERSON is a Professor of Computer Science and Engineering
at the University of California, Berkeley. e-mail: pattrsn@cs.berkeley.edu

ABHIJIT SAHAY received his PhD in Computer Science
from the University of California, Berkeley.  He 
is Systems R&D Engineer at
Iris Financial Engineering and Systems Inc.
email:	sahay@sphinx.com.

EUNICE E. SANTOS is an Assistant Professor in the Department of
Electrical Engineering and Computer Science at Lehigh University.
e-mail: santos@eecs.lehigh.EDU.

KLAUS ERIK SCHAUSER is Assistant Professor at the Department of
Computer Science at the University of California, Santa Barbara (e-mail:
schauser@cs.ucsb.edu).

RAMESH SUBRAMONIAN received his PhD in Computer Science
from the University of California, Davis.  He currently works for the
Lockheed corporation.  email: subramon@dipl.rdd.lmsc.lockheed.com.

THORSTEN VON EICKEN is an Assistant Professor in the 
Computer Science Department of Cornell University. e-mail: tve@cs.cornell.edu